Comment #6's Translation: What pretty description of as you has had the input for the book! Indeed! The extract seems to me written well, but it is an excerpt than gives me not theidea, of the story, of him or her... I don't know how to explain to you, it is a dialogue, but from the external I don't understand if they already know themselves, and how much, if we are at the beginning of the book, or at the end, or in between... I don't knows nothing of the character of her, or of him... it is a fast-paced dialogue, but only knowing the general introduction of the book, and without a precise positioning of this dialogue... I don't appreciate it, according to me! But the curiosity to understand... if he is a dead man, if she is dead... where they are going, and what it is happening on that train, that one yes, there is! Hello and thanks for the beautiful gift that you have made us! Tere