translation comment # 6 (Hatshepsut81)

Hello Emma,

my compliments for the excerpt. I can't wait for the next italian release.

I read your novel Beyon Innocence and I liked it, but I would like to ask you some questions if you allow me:

1. Don't you think you wrote too many times about the sexual state of the hero whenever he met Florence ? ("His cock leapt like a spawning salmon" is an example of the many ways you describe it)

2. In the Italian translation the characters' private parts are named by commonly used dirty terms.

It's the same even in the original edition? I'm not a churchy person but I've read other erotic authors who succeed in exciting the readers even using a more evocative phrasing.

Anyway, many compliments for the very detailed way of describing them.

3. Should Hugh Hefner ask you to write a novel about his sexual life with his three bunny girls would you accept ? and why?

Thank you for your answers and the bloggers for this interview.